At first looking at this image shows to me that you have a lot of hobbies, or that you like games. i like that the sword is in the bullseye of the dart board. did you use a certain type of glow effect for the clock? a word of advice might just to trim up a little bit with the selection tools. it looks good though i like it.
The WIP gives a sense of floating like in space because of all the items at different perspectives and angles to one another. There's also a sense of being removed from reality because all these floating objects seem to have life in them, like the lightbulb is on and the watch is glowing. I like the way a sense of coincidence is created with the sword in the center of the target, even though it's in the exact center, because there's no impact to draw your eye to it, it seems coincidental.
The overall work is very clean, there's a notch in the center sword (i don't know if that's purposeful) and the margin around the watch is a little choppy near the top. Beyond that it's great.
Nothing in the piece really immediately sticks out, my eye goes from the sword to the watch to the lightbulb initially and all seems to be in it's place. I would say the focal point of the piece is the main sword.
At first looking at this image shows to me that you have a lot of hobbies, or that you like games. i like that the sword is in the bullseye of the dart board. did you use a certain type of glow effect for the clock? a word of advice might just to trim up a little bit with the selection tools. it looks good though i like it.
ReplyDeleteThe WIP gives a sense of floating like in space because of all the items at different perspectives and angles to one another. There's also a sense of being removed from reality because all these floating objects seem to have life in them, like the lightbulb is on and the watch is glowing. I like the way a sense of coincidence is created with the sword in the center of the target, even though it's in the exact center, because there's no impact to draw your eye to it, it seems coincidental.
ReplyDeleteThe overall work is very clean, there's a notch in the center sword (i don't know if that's purposeful) and the margin around the watch is a little choppy near the top. Beyond that it's great.
Nothing in the piece really immediately sticks out, my eye goes from the sword to the watch to the lightbulb initially and all seems to be in it's place. I would say the focal point of the piece is the main sword.
This image is a bulls-eye.
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